Just Trying to be Me

by brittany   Oct 18, 2004


Sitting in the corner of the darkest part of my mind.
Where even the warped faces and distorted sounds cant get me.
Unreachable to the world.
It’s the place where I can bare all of me.
A lonely naked soul.
Young and fresh.
Like a flower, not yet fully grown but still blooming.
Still oblivious to the definite evils, waiting to take you, consume you, drown and drive you into a dark hole.
Inexperienced yet willing to learn.
Making mistakes on the way.
Still transforming into someone I can love.
Withdrawing back into the corner of my mind.
So I don’t go insane.
I’m free to be me.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow, lol one word "wow". I really like this poem. We have a similiar writing style I've noticed. Keep up the good work, you're very talented.