by Lillian
Im glad you commented on a poem of mine today.. I havent checked the site in a while and I would have certainly missed this gem... wherever this came from, whatever you meant by it.. it's great. I esp like the opening stanza (been there - can totally relate). I am throwing this out as suggestion only.. even though we are all different, I would like to see this wrap up with something that brings us all together again. What is it about love and living that is so individual and yet has the power to pull us to someone else? Anyway.. just a thought..lol. |
by Elena Romero
Your poem is really Great how at a point it all comes together. Well Thank you for commeting on my poem! |
by HOLLY ARMER
Brilliant... |
by June
Very good!!!certainly one that gets you thinking. |