Comments : Match Maker

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    You and her made a connection,
    A relationship too strong.
    You spent all of your time together,
    Now, where do I belong?

    very nice poem, a few flow problems but other than that a very nice poem, with hate, love, and wanting to belong all tied up together. i really like this stanza and the line "now where do i belong". it was meaningful and a good decription of the title match maker. "its like i made this happen so won't you let me in"

    but very nice poem and enjoyable to read---tara