Wow! Excellent! This poem was just so awesome... it's so great to be reading more of your poetry!!! Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

Not bad at all mate...i can see it as a punk song as it has a very limiting and repetitive flow to it that kinda felt like listening to a harcore tune....bang bang bang bang...

But i feel where's it coming from....learn to love them bro....

i thought this was going to be like my "darkness in disquise" but it wasn't lol. This was a good poem.

^thanks for your correction, i am not really good in grammar and thanks for letting me know my mistake