Wow!!! This was SO excellent! The way you described everything and how you wrote it... my... it just really touched my heart! Thank you for posting such an awesome poem! :) Take care and keep writing!

~Grace

wow! intersting word play! extremley meaningful! thank you for keeping in touch!
lexi lou

thank you for sharing 5

Simplistic but quite true. Amazing what three short words can do, isnt it?

That was quite great. Thanks for the comment on my poem man.

wow!i loved this 1.
awsome thoughts and an even awsomer way of putting it down!!! loved every bit of it.