Wow is it really that horrible because so far I've gotten a vote of 1 and 4 on it? Just wondering because well I think I've only given like 1 poem a 1 before and it truly was horrible...not even a barely consistent form or anything and well I just wondered if that's what this deserved.

Thanks a lot because I was gonna say if it really is that horrible then does anyone have any suggestions to make it better or anything..

Great Poem, I really loved the flow, keep up the great work. Tim