Oooooh this made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside LoL Beautiful girl such a timely expression of your love for a man - who i hope loves you back even more (im sure he does) really great expression of your feelings, very descriptive girl you have some great poetry and i look forward to reading more of it :o) I will keep an eye on your profile :o) Also feel free to have a read of my other stuff!!!!
Luv and Friendship Eirisa

LOL DAMN GIRL YOUR POEMS ARE CRAZY DEEP!! IM LOVIN IT LOL. I KEEP RELATING TO YOU IN YA POEMS. IVE SO FELT LIKE DAT B4 ITS CRAZY HARD WHEN IT GOES WRONG AND ITS LIKE WHOA LOL BUT LIKE I BEEN SAYING TALK TO ME IF U NEED TO CHAT OR NEED ADVICE GIRL IM HUR LOL. STAY REAL GIRL. MUCH LOVE AND RESPECT. HOLLA! 1

hehe sweet poem...keep it up!!

I like it. It doesn't flow as nicely as a lot of poems, but I feel the passion in it :))

i love it, it reminds me of me and my boyfriend, great job.