Start again

by SammiBABY   Oct 19, 2004


It's time for a new beginning,
Time to say goodbye to pain,
We can try once more,
when we start our lives again.
We need not regret
Because we've done no wrong,
Life has just begun
And we are really strong.
So forget your fights,
Forget your pain
Because our lives
Are starting again.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 20 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    i liked your poem and enjoyed the rythem to it. It flowed along very well, it had some good fung shai. I think that you should cotinue to write.

    I didn't give you five because i found that there was something abit missing, you didn't seem to seperate it into different stanza's and i felt like there were parts in it where you talked about something then when you started out talking about, i am not sure if you are talking about your life, your relationship, your family or what. I am finding it hard to figure that out.

    All in all it's a good poem. Good job.