Great job. I am sorry you regret moving. I don't like hearing your not happy!! Makes me sad. :( Keep up the good work. Keep your chin up. |
by Amy
I'm so sorry Babe! I wish you haven't have had to leave. Life is full of goodbyes, unfortunately. I'm really sorry. Anyway, great job on this poem. I love you tons and tons!! |
by Leah20
Awe, that was so sweet and heart felt! I absolutly loved it! I'm sorry that your friend had to leave. God will bring you two back together some day some how. Keep up the great writing! |
that is amazing.. you are such a skillful writer.. this poem.. its so strong.. truly an awesome poem.. keep up the good work.. |
by Jacklyn
aww thats sad! it's hard leaving a cherished one behind not knowing what the future will bring for you both. i like it when guys cry though shows that they have heart and aren't afaird to show it. if women are aloud to cry why can't guys? thats the way i see it. were all human and we ALL have weaknesses. touching poem i hope the best for you and what ever may happen between you both! |
by xo kisses xo
Awe *tear* are u really leaving? thats so sad. great poem 5/5 |