Comments : A Suicide Story

  • 20 years ago

    by LoSt

    great poem

  • 20 years ago

    by CryingForOnlyYou

    you made me cry. it's a great poem. your a great writer don't ever stop.

  • 20 years ago

    by candy

    awesome poem. wish i could write one like that, or even as good, sweet job.

  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    beatiful poem. reminds me a bit of me. just know, i never forget a good poem when i read one, and yours was more than just good, yours was phenomenal, so i won't forget it, or the way it touched me. brilliant work dude. :)
    xnikkix

  • 20 years ago

    by SheiLa

    wow, i'm amazed.. by the story line and ur writing..well, even if nobody cares about you, make sure you take care of yourself.. how do you expect people to care about you when you don't care for yourself~

    hold on and keep writing cause i'll be waiting for it..

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken

    oh wow....that really was touching...i could feel every word written...and..no...i wont forget this one....seriously...you have soooo much talent and i very much appreciate it...almost everything you write vaguely reminds me of myself....and i look forward to your next piece...just keep your head up...

  • 20 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    That was a wonderful poem. You are not alone. Reading it, I was sure the poem was about me.

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    i love it

  • 20 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    Wow now thats very sad. Good poem!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Free_Spirit

    Man that was awsome!!!...hehe i wish i could rite like u!!!! but i cant so yeah lol..ill jus read every1 else's!!!

    keep it up man!!! ur awsome!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Stacie

    Hey this poem was wonderful. Really sad....<tear> but you are really a talented writer...dont ever stop writing...Im here for u so if u ever wanna chat then email me stacielove14@aol.com bye

  • 20 years ago

    by JodieWatts

    cool gr8 poem

  • This poem is the bst i hve eva read i enjoyed reading this.......i understand how you are feeling its rele gd.........i dont kno wot else 2 say !!
    its rele gd........keep up the excellent wrk u need worthy praise 4 ur poems !! well dune !!
    luv **Tasha**

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Oh my god this poem was very sad but very well written. It was very creative, flowed magically, and it made me see from anothers point of view, and that doesnt happen to often. I can just go on and on with all of the good things about this poem but I think i will stop.. A definate 5! a 10 if I could give you one though

  • 20 years ago

    by kel

    Wow that was an fantastic poem...i wish i could write like that...it really touched me cos thats exactually how i feel...i felt tears in my eyes...please keep writing

  • 20 years ago

    by Lil Menace

    i loooove this poem, you are an amazing poet! this poem reminds me of me, so much! keep writing. don't let go..

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken

    you know, no matter how many times i read this poem of yours, it still has the same effect on me....this is truly a great poem....it has sooo much emotion built into it and its just unbelieveably good. great work

  • 20 years ago

    by des

    You remind me of me...I like to keep people guessing, myself ;) But it's a great piece of work. I've felt that way before...

  • 20 years ago

    by callie

    OMG!!! totally awesome. u have so much emotion. i'm speachless. your an awesome writer!! keep it up. much love!

  • 20 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    omg! you are such a great poet. you have a great talent dont ever give up. i would really like it if you could give me some tips on how you can egt such dramatic effects from words. thank you

    hugz and kisses xxx