by LoSt
great poem |
you made me cry. it's a great poem. your a great writer don't ever stop. |
by candy
awesome poem. wish i could write one like that, or even as good, sweet job. |
by nikki
beatiful poem. reminds me a bit of me. just know, i never forget a good poem when i read one, and yours was more than just good, yours was phenomenal, so i won't forget it, or the way it touched me. brilliant work dude. :) |
by SheiLa
wow, i'm amazed.. by the story line and ur writing..well, even if nobody cares about you, make sure you take care of yourself.. how do you expect people to care about you when you don't care for yourself~ |
by Broken
oh wow....that really was touching...i could feel every word written...and..no...i wont forget this one....seriously...you have soooo much talent and i very much appreciate it...almost everything you write vaguely reminds me of myself....and i look forward to your next piece...just keep your head up... |
by Luvmeluvr
That was a wonderful poem. You are not alone. Reading it, I was sure the poem was about me. |
by Broken Angel
i love it |
by Unloved ♥
Wow now thats very sad. Good poem!! |
by Free_Spirit
Man that was awsome!!!...hehe i wish i could rite like u!!!! but i cant so yeah lol..ill jus read every1 else's!!! |
by Stacie
Hey this poem was wonderful. Really sad....<tear> but you are really a talented writer...dont ever stop writing...Im here for u so if u ever wanna chat then email me stacielove14@aol.com bye |
by JodieWatts
cool gr8 poem |
This poem is the bst i hve eva read i enjoyed reading this.......i understand how you are feeling its rele gd.........i dont kno wot else 2 say !! |
Oh my god this poem was very sad but very well written. It was very creative, flowed magically, and it made me see from anothers point of view, and that doesnt happen to often. I can just go on and on with all of the good things about this poem but I think i will stop.. A definate 5! a 10 if I could give you one though |
by kel
Wow that was an fantastic poem...i wish i could write like that...it really touched me cos thats exactually how i feel...i felt tears in my eyes...please keep writing |
by Lil Menace
i loooove this poem, you are an amazing poet! this poem reminds me of me, so much! keep writing. don't let go.. |
by Broken
you know, no matter how many times i read this poem of yours, it still has the same effect on me....this is truly a great poem....it has sooo much emotion built into it and its just unbelieveably good. great work |
by des
You remind me of me...I like to keep people guessing, myself ;) But it's a great piece of work. I've felt that way before... |
by callie
OMG!!! totally awesome. u have so much emotion. i'm speachless. your an awesome writer!! keep it up. much love! |
omg! you are such a great poet. you have a great talent dont ever give up. i would really like it if you could give me some tips on how you can egt such dramatic effects from words. thank you |