Comments : 14 year old murderer

  • 20 years ago

    by candy

    not true at all...i just noticed how all my poems are about the same things, and decided to give this one a twist.

  • 20 years ago

    by Haleigh

    Candy that poem was amazing I personally love all of them, they make me want to write better and you have alot of talent keep writin

  • 20 years ago

    by candy

    thnx

  • 20 years ago

    by ~*Kymber*

    wow, you really have a knack for puting words together.i really like you writting

  • 20 years ago

    by foreverhappy

    I think this is poem is really good... In a very twizted sort of way but i like it!

  • 20 years ago

    by ~Tamara~

    Hey That Was So Good.... I Really like you rwirteing...... You Should Check out mine some time.... Its the same kinda stuff

  • 20 years ago

    by kaderbader

    this poem is very interesting candy i liked it a lot read summa mine and tell me what you think

  • 20 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Not one of your best? Then your others must be spectacular! I shall read them! ahem.. very good!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken

    WOW!!! i certainly hope that this didn't really happen but you kept my eyes glued to every word...it was so full of suspence, i loved it!

  • 20 years ago

    by Shona

    wow that was amazing, youre really talented, keep writing! ...did that really happen????

    xoxoxoxoxox

  • 20 years ago

    by Shona

    wow that was amazing, youre really talented, keep writing! ...did that really happen????

    xoxoxoxoxox

  • 20 years ago

    by Shona

    wow that was amazing, youre really talented, keep writing! ...did that really happen????

    xoxoxoxoxox

  • 20 years ago

    by Shona

    wow that was amazing, youre really talented, keep writing! ...did that really happen????

    xoxoxoxoxox

  • 20 years ago

    by Shona

    woah sht sorry i didnt realise i submitted the comment like 5 times..it wouldnt come up as ur comment has been added so i jus kept submitting it..sorry!

    xoxo

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Chilling girl and whatta original twist well done on a fantastically rythmic and vivid poem!

  • 20 years ago

    by callie

    wow. for it not being your best its pretty damn good. keep it up!

  • 20 years ago

    by candy

    thanks

  • 20 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOW!!! bravo bravo! Give yourself a pat on the back for that one! I have no idea what to say ..a good job,,a great job..i dont know!! That poem left me at the edge of my seat..i hope it was a story and not true! but this was just amaing i had such teary eyes! well done...: Take care! much love,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 20 years ago

    by Brittany

    i can relate to suicide thing. i've tried but little at a time. i really like the discription and the detail.great poem.

  • 20 years ago

    by Brittany

    by the way read my poems