lol, thanks everyone for the comments, and no, its not true. i could maybe think of killing myself, but not my little sisters...even if they are devils in disguise ;)

your have an extreme insane talent you right with soothing but yet shocking lines seems as if you put yourself full force into your work thats so awsome you truly inspire me and many...the story was heartfully painful but yet you went where some writers won't go keep it up and write your heart away

steph

very deep, you'll be a great writer one day- like a edgar allen poe.

thank ya

thats an awsome poem. i wish i could do shit like that!!! damn.your my insperation to write poems even thought im not very good at it.

write me some time and maybe you could give me some pointers.

heres my email.

babybuloga692003@yahoo.com

holy crap that is the scarriest thing i have ever heard
is it about someone you know or is it realy you? I love your writing pease dont stop!!!!

Wow, This is such an amazing poem, it really hit me when i read it, well structured and puts the point across, Keep writing, Check out my stuff if you like. X

hey i can relait to alot of that im always home alone but i would never kill my brothers and there older then me soo they could take me down lol well geat poem dont stop wrighting

is that truuuee? it's faireh good :) i like it, although, it's sad <3 emz

Very good poem, really touching story.

did that really happen, i am sorry that poem is one of the best i have heard email me if ya eva want someone to talk to, heathercraig8@hotmail.com

omg... that's amazing. it's breath-taking and the twist is such a thriller. deeply chilling. you have talent! take care

omg that was sooo amazing!!! hopefully ur not the murderer tho rite? lol jk. but that poem was very good. i dont no how u could say it wasnt one of ur best.

i was so not expecting that! it was awesome, i love all your poems, especially the Mommy where are you one!! take a look at mine and comment, i would like ur ideas:)

WHOA! That poem really just blew me away. EXCELLENT! For that one single poem I am going to add you to my favorites so I can read the rest. Keep it up chick!!!! Take Care