by Allen
:( in a way I can relate, and in a way, I don't at all... but never the less, its a good write, love the flow, love the rhyme :) Keep it up Jackie... take care. |
Great job, i can relate to this, i am sure a lot of people can. Keep up the good work. |
omgg i really love this poem! this is awsome i no exactly how u feel. this is great keep it up! 5/5 |
by amiee
hey chick,your poem is brill thanx 4 commenting on mine you have got such good use of words and everything keep it up |