Haiku #4

Nicely modern haiku while preserving all the elements.

i gave it a 5

nice haiku, i tried to write on a couple days ago but this by far is better. I don't understand the low rating on this thought it is better than a 3.6 by far.

... heh, brings back memories.
Now.... sadness of cloudy weather brings sadness in cloudiness in humans? Yes? Maybe it's about the apocalypse, or the phase just before the actual hellfire.

Aken Sol

i liked it too! loved the alliteration (don't see it often in other people's works). keep it up. i enjoyed reading it. take care:)