Comments : Haiku #4

  • 20 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    Funny, its raining right now...ohhh =P.

  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    i liked it too! loved the alliteration (don't see it often in other people's works). keep it up. i enjoyed reading it. take care:)

  • 20 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    ... heh, brings back memories.
    Now.... sadness of cloudy weather brings sadness in cloudiness in humans? Yes? Maybe it's about the apocalypse, or the phase just before the actual hellfire.

    Aken Sol

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacki

    nice haiku, i tried to write on a couple days ago but this by far is better. I don't understand the low rating on this thought it is better than a 3.6 by far.

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacki

    i gave it a 5

  • 20 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Nicely modern haiku while preserving all the elements.