by Lance Hardy
Funny, its raining right now...ohhh =P. |
by vanessarrr
i liked it too! loved the alliteration (don't see it often in other people's works). keep it up. i enjoyed reading it. take care:) |
by Aken Sol
... heh, brings back memories. |
by Jacki
nice haiku, i tried to write on a couple days ago but this by far is better. I don't understand the low rating on this thought it is better than a 3.6 by far. |
by Jacki
i gave it a 5 |
by FTS Miles
Nicely modern haiku while preserving all the elements. |