I am not a big fan of poems that don't rhyme, but I really liked the content here. It was beautifully written. Good job. You might like my poems as well, if you read them, please comment.

i see it like the comment before, that i don't like poems without rhyming the way i do like the ones with, even though your poem is beautiful, most of all i like the prayer in the end, very good written

you have wrote this so well. i could picture everything. wonderful job!