I like the double meaning in this line: "please cum back"
A 4
Cheers

I liked this it read really good and I saw alot of talent there would like to see more of your work if you get a chance read Hold Me and Burn I think you would like both of them.

hey guys thanc heep i dudn't really fink it was a gud poem but oh well as lon as u like it i dun mind :D fanx

cool man how good is this? GREAT! keep it up?

There are a lot of mistakes in this poem. no should be KNOW cum should be COME not to mention there are no commas, or periods

omg stop complaing about speeling mistakes jeez!!! wow i made mistake hu cares n it aint a mistakes dats how i rite

AWSOME! WOW! I LOVE IT! I CAN REALLY RELATE TO IT! AWSOME WRITING!!

Keep it Up!

999999/5
lol- if only that was possible

Luv kt