by PAUL HEWSON Oct 20, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
!!!! not my usual style , cheesy , bit like a script in a valentines card !!!! but hey it was fun : ) |
by HOLLY ARMER
All I can say is if this is cheesy...bring on the Velveeta. I think it is beautiful. It made my heart flutter...great job~Holly |
by Lipton
Hey this is really cool. I like it. Keep it up! |
by Hope
I love it how you use the numbers in order to rhyme and the use of similies while also repeating the reasons 'i love you.' Creative structure. Nice work!!! :) |
by Mustardhart
Hmmn make me wonder!!! That was deep and penetrating. Thanks for sharing this. Great write!!!! |
by CaL25
This poem is great! Smooth.. |