ooh, i really like this one. i could imagine everything, it was just playing in my mind as i was reading. great job!

THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM!YOU DID A GREAT JOB WRITTING THIS AND KEEP ON WRITTING I LOVED IT!

Very passionate. I loved this piece! The descriptions were superb, and the flow flawless..Great job~Holly

Oh wow! this was such a brilliant piece!! just amazing!!!! I really loved your usage of words, the way you put this poem together was so beautiful!!
great job and best of luck.
luv elizabeth

great poem!

i really liked this poem