i think this poem is great!

Hey i rated your poem an excellent! Sometimes its hard to get your feelings out onto paper, but dont rush it or try to push it, it will come naturally. When i feel it isnt working i just sit in my room and look at the paper and just write down what has ahppened or whatever and it come out! anywho good luck with future writing and my best wishes from my black heart! love always xox jez

You say that this poem isn't very good, but you are mistaken. This is beautifully written and expressive. I really liked it. You might like my poetry too, please read and comment as well. :-)

wow that was brill

I understand the having trouble with feelings, thing, it might just be writers block or something...anyways, this poem wasn't bad at all though! It was amazing, I especially loved the first and last lines, well put. I can't wait to read more. xxxxx
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Great sad poem i have a poem like the mother righteing to the kid but its not posted