lol, i dont know if ive ever been called hot in my poetry comments, thanks, i really appreciate it, lol. And the poem is almost about what u thought it was about, except its my ex, and i wanted to take teh chance of getting back wth her. did u read the prequel to this poem?

if you really love her that much then keep trying and never give up. But if it doesn't work out the second time don't go for a third. Trust me on that one

aww hun..this is really good:) and the prequel too.. i hope it works out for you, you deserve it. sometimes us girls are a bit confuzzling but dont give up just yet, she'll realize your a sweetheart and i'm sure she misses you too..It's all going to be ok in the end, maybe not now, but when its all worked out its worth it:)

Hold on for one more day,
Tina