Broken Promise That Killed

by Haleigh   Oct 20, 2004


I looked around and shut my door
Sitting alone I started to crave
I promised I wouldn't do it anymore
All my blades to you I supposedly gave
Secretly I kept just two
I put the sharpest to my skin
I was only thinking about you
The line I made was oh so thin
Not thinking anything of it I went to sleep
I woke up in the middle of the night
And realized that I had cut a bit to deep
I ran to turn on the light
There was blood everywhere
To you I shouldn't have lied
Because it wasn't going to be fair
You were going to get a call saying I had died
That I had committed suicide
So I wrote you a note saying I was sorry
Begging you to forgive me
That I didn't mean to break my promise
And right before I was about to die
I signed it and said good-bye

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  • 20 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    Wow...thats a great poem!! It was awesome! I hope you never try comitting suicide ever again. i know how it is to feel that way. i hope you're okay!
    Love always
    Sammy

  • 20 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    dont kill yourself please....you are an awesome writer! and you seem like you have so much potential and this poem proives it, if you ever need anyone to talk to please contact me! keep in touch!
    lexi lou

  • 20 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    This is a beautiful sad poem. I really liked it.