Comments : Cutting.

  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    oh wow!! this poem is just...just amazing!!!!! You put it soo perfectly into words..so true, so powerful, so real. I could relate to this poem most definately! I think you did a wonderful job writing this piece..like all the poems you write! Your words never fail to amaze me!! Your writing is so full of talented, its beautiful!! I wish you the best, and the strength to stop that addiction!
    Stay safe and take care!
    luv elizabeth

  • 20 years ago

    by Luvmeluvr

    You are a wonderful poet. Please don't cut yourself. There are people that feel the same way. You can talk to us. Me.

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken_princess

    mY BEST FRIEND DID THE SAME THING, AND ITS TRUE ONCE U FOUND THAT ONE FRIEND YOU WILL STOP. SHE STOPED FOR ME. I THINK YOU SHOULD TRY YOUR BEST NOT TO DO THIS. I KNOW ITS HARD. I LOVED THE POEMS U R A GREAT WRITER...

  • 20 years ago

    by SheiLa

    dear.. it's painful.. though i'm a cutter myself, the physical pain in not that intense.. i can see that you're in great pain.. there will be a right person for you but you just didn't find him/her yet.. try to find someone to talk to and perhaps you can feel better.. that's what i do~

  • 20 years ago

    by pinkalias

    wow.....this is so moving and this is going to sound strange but when i read this poem...its stings. you have such a gift, i love how your able to put your pain into words, "Tonight when I turn on the water
    And feel it trickel down my face
    I'll grab that razor from the shelf
    And let it prove my bloodied disgrace"
    i love that stance. the way that you described your pain using graphic painful words like burning, ill cut to the bone....wow. i hope that you will seek refuge in your writing and not in the blade, your amazing.

  • 20 years ago

    by Robyn

    wow great poem but also very very sad if need some one to just talk to u can talk to me about any thing i may not know any thing about cutting but my friends so if u want to talk e mail me at robynz13@hotmail.com i gave ur poem a 5 nice work

    keep ur head up high
    the sky id ur limit

    love yah '
    robyn

  • 20 years ago

    by V U L N E R A B L E

    This is amazing i kno just how it feels...exactly how it feels........keep your head up and realize someone luvs you it will be alright.....you will be alright..i kno i am

  • 20 years ago

    by *tanya*

    hey sweetie, i know EXACTLY how u feel...you worded it all perfectly, you described exactly how i feel when i do it, (also in the shower) and i agree, it is an addiction. if you ever need to talk, i am here.. might help both of us :)
    your writing skills are excellent, i cant believe you are only 15!! oh and you might wanna check out some of my poems that have a similar themes...
    anyways, great writing, keep it up!
    much love, tanya :D