Lingering Thoughts

by Aken Sol   Oct 21, 2004


Temptation from the start
Deprivation in my heart
I don’t know why she’s his girl
My mind is spinning in a whirl

Of unchained thoughts and possibilities

Mapped out desires that is too real
Wrapped up feelings I shouldn't feel
For he has always been my friend
More reason for me to defend

This crazed hunger for rationalities

He doesn’t treat her quite right
She doesn’t seem that bright
Receiving heartache and pain
Disbelieving sunshine when it rains

With angry blows and hostilities

Vile is his treatment to this sweetie
Bile is what he is to me
Learnt not to appreciate this gift
Burnt hot as my anger begins to shift

Towards change with probable casualties

Through idle eyes I stared
Grew the silent protest I bared
It seems as though fate is set
Fit, as I try to forget

These unchained thoughts and possibilities

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  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Heh, I remember when you asked me for certain words, and look, they turned up in this poem! ;-)

  • 20 years ago

    by Nothing

    you are such a great writer and are able to capture other people's feelings as well.very good job. look at some of my poems too pls.

  • 20 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Excellent. Angry and philosophical all at once. I've got to echo Elizabeth... I love "Disbelieving sunshine when it rains" because it just resonates well on experience.

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    OMG blown away Akun this poem was truly unique and such an amazing pleasure to read hun - really really original work you should be extremely proud of :o)
    =Eirisa=

  • 20 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    awesome! i loved it! its truly amazing!keep in touch!
    lexi lou

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