awesome! i loved it! its truly amazing!keep in touch!
lexi lou

OMG blown away Akun this poem was truly unique and such an amazing pleasure to read hun - really really original work you should be extremely proud of :o)
=Eirisa=

Excellent. Angry and philosophical all at once. I've got to echo Elizabeth... I love "Disbelieving sunshine when it rains" because it just resonates well on experience.

you are such a great writer and are able to capture other people's feelings as well.very good job. look at some of my poems too pls.

Heh, I remember when you asked me for certain words, and look, they turned up in this poem! ;-)