Okay yeah, I know it's corny, but I've never been good at writing poems.

Hey Hey! What are you doing? That poem was great! Nobody thinks their own work is really good (unless you're arrogant). I think it's good. Keep writing when you get the chances!

However, the title is a little strange, but that shouldn't affect the poem itself! =)

~Ciao Lipton

Sorry, I would have voted, but I can't because it said I already have... Anyway, you're missing a vote that's worth 5!

Another excellent poem. Keep it up

great poem keep up the good work

You are an excellant poet don't put yourself down. Trust me you are very good, I've been writing since I was eight.