by Robert Oct 21, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
It has been three years since you we started this path, |
by Zeus
It was truly nice. I liked the feeling and emotion you put. It was deep and sweet. 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
This is so sweet robert! Well penned! Very deep! well done! flow was good! and again another 5/5! keep writing :) |
Great work,Robert!..sweet and beautifully penned...perfect choice of words..though the rhymes do seem a little forced....all over a sweet poem..expressed well..kp writing!5/5!! |
by Clarissa
really original and definitly stands out on it's own... wonderful job! |
by Mandy Lou
This one also does not meet your own standards...It feels almost as though you're TRYING to rhyme... |