Three Years

by Robert   Oct 21, 2004


It has been three years since you we started this path,
you were there to make me smile and laugh.
You gave me what I thought I would never knew,
a love wrapped in the arms of you.
I have often dreamed of this so many lonely nights,
but you when you showed me love I knew it was right.
A touch that left me breathless, and words that made me free,
were the keys my salvation that taught me all I was to be?
My heart is given to you without regret,
and I feel I loved you even before we ever met.
Yes I did love you or the idea of what you could be,
and today you have come and stand beside me.
No words could ever really compare,
for the love I know we both share.
No action could ever express I feel,
for I know this now you are my biggest thrill.
Three years is not along time for a relationship to survive,
but I understand as I hold you close you make me alive.
What can I do to say thanks or ever let you know,
that before you I had no real life to show.
You are my beginning and end to all,
so my love let us lock our doors for tonight passion calls.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2004

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  • 17 years ago

    by Zeus

    It was truly nice. I liked the feeling and emotion you put. It was deep and sweet. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This is so sweet robert! Well penned! Very deep! well done! flow was good! and again another 5/5! keep writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Great work,Robert!..sweet and beautifully penned...perfect choice of words..though the rhymes do seem a little forced....all over a sweet poem..expressed well..kp writing!5/5!!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Clarissa

    really original and definitly stands out on it's own... wonderful job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This one also does not meet your own standards...It feels almost as though you're TRYING to rhyme...
    *You gave me what I thought I would never KNEW,
    a love wrapped in the arms of YOU". It doesn't make sense that way bc you're tenses are all mixed...I don't know, it only needs a little revision...