full of sentiment, robert!

This one also does not meet your own standards...It feels almost as though you're TRYING to rhyme...
*You gave me what I thought I would never KNEW,
a love wrapped in the arms of YOU". It doesn't make sense that way bc you're tenses are all mixed...I don't know, it only needs a little revision...

really original and definitly stands out on it's own... wonderful job!

Great work,Robert!..sweet and beautifully penned...perfect choice of words..though the rhymes do seem a little forced....all over a sweet poem..expressed well..kp writing!5/5!!
xxPoojaxx

This is so sweet robert! Well penned! Very deep! well done! flow was good! and again another 5/5! keep writing :)

It was truly nice. I liked the feeling and emotion you put. It was deep and sweet. 5/5