A Life For A Life

by Robert   Oct 21, 2004


I place my fingers to your eyes so you could rest,
For love I know they tried to do their best.
You left just a few seconds ago,
but they the paper work will still be slow.
I brought you here so that we would finally know joy,
the birth of our love is a boy.
They told me I had all the time I need to say goodbye,
but my only question now is why?
It was only this morning that you gave me a kiss,
and we were in love a world full of bliss.
Now I lay my head on a hollow shell,
feeling like I am in some Earthly hell.
Without you how could I go another day,
well I must just to see our son play.
He never know how much you loved him for real,
and he will never understand the sadness I feel.
The darkness is now giving away to the light,
and I some how still feel you are in close sight.
I see the things that remind me of you,
and then I understand what I must do.
You gave me a son, and paid it with your life,
thank you my love and know you will the only one that will be my wife.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2004

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  • 19 years ago

    by Naima

    In the beginning I thought maybe she died giving birth. Then, I thought she commited suicide. So what happened? Are you ok? Well the poem was good not great but In order for me to judge you as a poet I would need to read more of your work. So yeah I'm going to check out one of your romantic poems cause I could use a man who's good with words...

  • 19 years ago

    by Naima

    It's Good. I felt that it could use some more work. There are grammar errors and So parts come together oddly. The rhymes are ok, I

  • 19 years ago

    by Naima

    It's Good. I felt that it could use some more work. There are grammar errors and So parts come together oddly. The rhymes are ok, I

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Now I lay my head on a hollow shell,
    feeling like I am in some Earthly hell.

    i liked these lines :D

    it was a great poem, it had alot of emotion and told a story a sad story but a story :D
    i voted 5/5 x

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost2Life

    okay job...4/5