by Robert Oct 21, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I place my fingers to your eyes so you could rest, |
by Naima
In the beginning I thought maybe she died giving birth. Then, I thought she commited suicide. So what happened? Are you ok? Well the poem was good not great but In order for me to judge you as a poet I would need to read more of your work. So yeah I'm going to check out one of your romantic poems cause I could use a man who's good with words... |
by Naima
It's Good. I felt that it could use some more work. There are grammar errors and So parts come together oddly. The rhymes are ok, I |
by Naima
It's Good. I felt that it could use some more work. There are grammar errors and So parts come together oddly. The rhymes are ok, I |
by ASPHYXIATED
Now I lay my head on a hollow shell, |
by Lost2Life
okay job...4/5 |