boa man! that way of writing would be too difficult for me, so you have my respect in doing that hard job

Nice poem...Really traditional...but thats what you've wanted right? ;o)

wow your a really good poet im also 16 and right and i thought that i was good lol well thats what people say but your hella good great jobs your on my favorits list keep it up.

wow! beautiful poem!

wow....confusing.....i never learned that in poetry class. i loved the poem! nice job! but i guess i learn something new everyday!

wow that is amazing! I loved the imagery and the form! Im adding you to my favorites. Keep up the great work!!

-jenn

wow that was really good!! loved the poem!! keep it coming!! :)

good poem i liked it....5/5
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