Nice poem!!! I really like it. And thankx for the comments about mine....:D

U r honestly such a good writter. I hav commented on ur stuff a cpl of times b4 (i used to be Lucy) but seriously you r really talented adn u no how 2 express urself. i cant do that, major prob with words, but u make the reader feel emotion and that is a great achievement, Comgratulations. keep ur heap up, keep writtign and u will get thru this

thank you so much! not just for ur comments but for ur support! it means heaps to me.. :D

that is a really really great poem girl!your seriously talented and i hope it all goes well for you, people like you in this world deserve all the hapiness there is, good luck, keep writing, and im sure ill comment again coz i relate to most of your stuff. again, your really really talented so keep your chin up and always face the sun so you'll never see the shadows :)

wow thank you :D