Thanks,

Sure ill go noiseing around in ur poems again.
and ill stop in hollycraps too

-Josiah

ya the spelling does need to be fixed but I have not go to that yet
I fixed it in my paper just not on here.

-Josiah

very well written poem...loved the ending, it was very surprising....great work!!

Thank you so much;)

-Josiah

Wow super good... I'm gettin ready to go in to the marines and wow this poem was I dunno it got me thinkin about how much I love my wife and how goin into the war is gonna be crazy! keep up the good work!

Wow i really love this poem..and i love how it was from your heart and when its from your heart it doesn't matter how you write it...i lost my boyfriend in the war in iraq..he sent me a letter the day before sayin how he had a feeling he wasn't goin to make it back..and the three days later his family recieved a notice that he was killed in a car bomb...i was devestated..so this poem really means a whole lot, and should make ppl double think about goin to war esp. if they are goin to be leaving loved ones behind..cuz being alive and never in the army is better then being in the army and dead...cuz no one feels more pain then your loved ones...

great peice of work!!