True emotions beautifully placed :) a very nice piece of writing... A true poem from the heart, its a real pleasure to read :) keep it up and take care :D

Aww Allen 'n' Chris, you guyz are making me blush!! thanks for your comments and Chris, you are an inspiration to me, your writing is so beautiful, I feel honoured to be commented on by you. And Allen my fairygodfather! i wanna read more poems fromyou!! start writing hun

you have such a great way with words. i really like this poem, its excellent.

hmm...U.U maybe thats how i really feel... i just cant find my real feeling... but still im in pain.. in great pain... i love your poem... i truly do... keep up the good job...^.^make more true poems...or quotes o.O....goodbye