UNDERSTOOD
by xeag Oct 22, 2004
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Its hard to say what you mean to me but i know you understand you've always been there to comfort me and I'm so lucky to have a friend like you no matter what happened i could always talk to you. You've always been there for me never questioning a thing instead you stood besides me and understood me. There are so many things that i want to tell you but i know i don't have to because i know your already trying to make things better. I'm so lucky to have you I'm so lucky your in my life...your my very best friend .... |
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19 years ago
by Scarlette
At first glance, I thought it was just a run-on paragraph. You need to go to the next line whenever a new thought starts. You can't have it all in one paragraph like that. It ruins the whole poem. Also, you might want to get someone to check over the spelling/grammar, because there are a few mistakes. Honestly, I can't say much more about it. Once you've formatted it into more of a poetic structure, then I'll comment on it again.
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19 years ago
by Andrea
yes you are very lucky to have a best friend by your side. good poem!
