I think one of my very first comments to your poetry was something like, You are much too young to be so dark. Another great write. I never grow tired of reading your work. Keep em comin, and go carve a pumpkin this week.

WOW! This is excellent!!! Very well written and it flows so nicely. Well done!

wow, very well written, and it can be read very good, the content is also very good chosen, i like it.

Wow this was a truly excellent poem. I really liked the way it wasnt too long but not to short either. Also the rhyming flowed really well! I give you a definate five!
Take care,
Rachelxx

It's awsome one of the best ones i have heard i love it although i am not dark in any way shape or form i love it and also my name is tara to sorry just had to say that

~~TARA~~

"I live each day just because
The next ones going to come"

I have felt like this for a very long time in my life and i'm glad those thoughts are behind me now, but still it made me remember my past for a sec.

I really like the darkness and sadness here, great written poem.

5/5

xo angelique

Awww, this poem was a peaceful sad poem. i enjoyed reading this. keep it up

Amazing, the imagery was fantastic and the lines were full of emotions. I enjoyed reading this. An excellent piece certainly 5/5