Very sad. I'm teary eyed :( Very deep though and by writing this poem dedicated to her, you are showing a lot of love! The same thing happend to me in 5th grade but it hurts till this day and i remember it like it was jusy yesterday. Take care!

Extremely deep but an amazing tribute to your tragically lost friend...i have lost many friends to such a tragedy so i could relate to this poem and it brought me back alot of sad memories ... I dont know if many ppl are aware that suicide take more lives annually than car accidents...i think as a society we all need to start looking more closely at a means of suicide prevention and mental health issues to hellp prevent youth these days doing this - it really is sad hun and im so sorry for your loss keep up the wonderful work tho :o)
Luv Eirisa

I am sorry for your lost I lost my homeboy the same way...and all you can think about is why would they end their life, was the pain that painful.

I am truly sorry for your lost

My very best friends father just killed himself a couple of weeks ago and I can't understand why, his daughter can't understand what was that bad in his life. He was sick but it sucks to think he was in that much pain. I don't know, But that was an awesome poem!! Sorry to hear that it is a true story though.

Oh, sad, very sad. I could never imagine having a friend commit such a life-selling act, must've been terrible! You wrote it well, keep writing!

I have been through the same thing. This boy Ethan from my school killed himself as well. If you read my poem its call I miss him. I know the pain.

thanks for all the comments so far everyone...they mean more than i can say.-ashlee

That poem was good um you are right no one should ever kill themselves cause they will never see GOD CAUSE WHEN YOU KILL YOURSELF YOU ARE GOING TO HELL SO NO ONE WANT TO BURN FOREVER UNLESS YOUR ARE CRAZY REMEMBER GOD LOVES ALL HIS CHILDREN