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by Luz Oct 22, 2004 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Collapsed Breathless, “Please stay out†Crying, In Pain, “ Please stop hurting me†Eyes Shut, Breath Heavy, “ I have no hope†Trembling, Dizzy, “ Don’t make me do it†Bleeding, Groggy “I made the same mistake†The thoughts, they come, they go, those terrible thoughts, they consume. Silently, Swiftly, They take control, They guide me, They are me Tired, Broken, “Maybe your right†Abandoned, Confused, “ Should I take my life†The thoughts they tell me, They push me towards the light They take over, I am nothing, Another soul, lost, in the endless night Dying, Torn, “ I wish it wasn’t so Dead, Gone “ I no longer have controlâ€
by Lexi Lou
truly amazing! you seem like a truly talented writer! please keep in touch! lexi lou
by Luvmeluvr
Wow. That was VERY powerful. I loved it. I feel the poem very deep.