by Jacki Oct 22, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
You think that I am innocent |
by Jacki
to roberts comment the menice would be my own dark thoughts. But I wrote this poem many years ago this is the poem actully that got me writing the darker side. But thanks everyone so much for you comments ;) |
by Ian Robert
Well done, needs a bit of clean up, then maybe re read a few times to help the flow, but other than that its wonderful, keep up the good work |
by Timothy r
Wow Jackie, I really loved this poem a lot, you really write in this genre very very well, Im in awe of your talent. Tim |
by Robert
Very good but you never really mention what this menice is. A good read but left too open for me needs to close it up but a good job left me reading anyway take care and if you get time check out my work |
by Jacki
thank you so much for all your comments :) can't wait to read some of your poems |