as i read this the tears rolled down my face,i could taste the salty tears as if i was crying the tears you once cried.be strong.your a gr8 writer,its been along time since i cried but your poem just seemed to hit home inside.please dont give up,and please keep writing.

Absolutly Beautiful.

Stardom Beautiful.

I cried my eeyes out and I still am. aww I'm so sorry. I really am. It must be hard hunn. stay strong. you are such an AMAZING writer. If you ever want to talk my AIM is lyssxo928 and my email is alyssaangel67@verizon.net
take care hunni. love ya
alyssa

this brought tears to my eyes. i remember my own father who died last year...my father was raised the same way...a very touching poem im sure he wud love it and be proud of you for writing such beauty.
~Freak~

amazin poem 5/5

leave out the numbers and put actual words...
~Freak~

Nikki ...
That was so sad ..
The hardest thing in life is to lose someone you love ...
Very emotional and heartfelt poem
that really hit my heart ...
~ Hugs ~

Beautiful... i didnt cry... but it does take a lot to move me to tears.... i love the line "but these tears i cry today, these tears are for my father"

Wow hun...tears are also running down my face...
that is an exceptionally beautiful poem...wow.
stay strong girl xoxo

Made me cry.
I'm so sorry, it's hard to lose a loved one.
Touched my heart.
Much love
-Emma

I loved this poem. It makes me appreciate my own father so much more. =)
Great job 5/5

Good poem I like it

That was so full of emotion, it was jsut amasing! It was so detailed and sad i almost cried, I hope this isn't a true story, cause that would be horrible! You've got talent though, wow.

--Steph

It wuz good really good 5/5

Beautiful....u always make me cry..! 5/5 again

XoXsweetkissesXoX

I have to comment because this was amazing! I too lost my father at an early age but my family didn't really care.... Parents divorced. I was all he had left and I had moved away with my mom to another state .... It had been 8 years since I last saw him,on the day he died which was in 2002. lovely poem, enjoyed it very much!!!