by Jackie Bilson Oct 23, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
He was thirteen and I was fourteen, |
by Gracie Jo
A wonderful poem. You wrote it so well and the emotion flowing through it was just magnificent! Keep up the awesome work hun! Take care! |
Aww that is such a beautiful poem!! the repitition is awesome and your wording is just amazing! |
by Allen
:) nicely written... tells the story, sounds familiar to my own... *sigh*... keep up the good work girl :) take care :) |