........ Wasting our time.... NOOOOOOO i don't think so.. This was good... It does seem like it was unfinished but what you have is very good... I really liked it.. even though it was depressing........................... hehe Anyways.. NOOO i don't want you to take me off your favs list... not all all.. I'm adding you to mine... So just for the record.. I can write weird comments.. and if i do.. just means i drank a lot of coffee.. it's like a drug to me.. anyways you don't need to know that.. Keep up the great work.. Looking forward to read more.. Take care and keep writing..
Angel

this isnt a crappy poem! and trust me i didnt waste my time reading this. if more than anything i enjoyed it!

I liked it too, keep up the good work.

Take care

I like it. I can feel the pain.

It's not crappy...I'll waste my time...I ain't got nothing better to do with it! I spend my life on the computer! HANG IN THERE!

It's not crappy! And I'm not wasting my time. It was really good... But the part about "When I'm finally dead and gone, Will I even be missed" Yes, you will be missed. I'd even miss you, AND I DON'T KNOW YOU!

Sadly I frrl that way sometimes bur anyway great work 5/5