Doesn't Make You A Man

by Chelsea R.   Oct 23, 2004


The sky is black
and the clouds are gray
the flowers all wilted
when you went away

Don't you get it
don't you want to understand
lying and cheating on me
doesn't make you a man

I can't help but still care
I'm so stupid believing you
I just want to forget
but I don't know what to do

All the tears you've made me cry
and yet I still want you with me
why is this so hard
I never thought this is how love would be

crying when he hurt you
still wanting him back if all he does is cheat
there's no guy I've met that hasn't hurt me
will there ever be one to meet

I'm so broken, so cold
It's been raining all day long
I just miss you now
and all I can think of is why your gone

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  • 19 years ago

    by N8

    hey chels I was just readin your poems and I was commenting and holy crap that chris guy ummm not to say nuts cuz that would be mean but he uses big words to much lol any ways I love all your poems alot!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB
    Nate

  • 20 years ago

    by Chelsea R.

    thanx Jarous im glad you think so! I hope i feel better 2:0)

    -(Chelsea)-

  • 20 years ago

    by Chelsea R.

    Thanx a ton Chris! I think its awesome that you love my poetry! thanx 4 all of the compliments!!

    --chels