that's really cool, something different, I like it, keep up the good work hun, take care

i really like this one a lot... i just love the way you expressed your pain in the poem and how much you love somone... I've been feeling hurt like this myself and it's killing me inside to still love this guy so much, when I know he'll never care for me again like i care for him... it seems like all hope is lost... but really it's not, i can just keep thinking to myself,... maybe someday he'll realize what he's missing because I really don't think he's happy anymore.

I really really like your poems so keep on writing! i will always be reading your poems and commenting! keep reading mine too!! thanks!

much love,
-Molly

;.; Thats so beautiful!!! I would have cried a little if i wasn't listening to limp Bizkit. another job well done!! I'm looking foreward to any new poems you may write.

Thanks