by Marta Oct 23, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Your eyes so green and pure |
I do really like this poem, but I wish you'd have worked on the last stanza some more. I think if you'd have made the lines slightly longer like the rest of the poem, It'd be prefect. I REALLY enjoyed this. Such emotion. Well done :) Take care. |
by *Elizabeth*
WOW!!! this was such a great, great poem!!! I really really liked this one. I think everyone could interperate it differetly, and its like the poem you can always some how relate to yourself!! I really really liked! great job girl!!! |
by Luvmeluvr
Very beautiul poem. Keep up the good work! |
by Andrea
wow...excellent poem! |