wow...excellent poem!

Very beautiul poem. Keep up the good work!

WOW!!! this was such a great, great poem!!! I really really liked this one. I think everyone could interperate it differetly, and its like the poem you can always some how relate to yourself!! I really really liked! great job girl!!!
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I do really like this poem, but I wish you'd have worked on the last stanza some more. I think if you'd have made the lines slightly longer like the rest of the poem, It'd be prefect. I REALLY enjoyed this. Such emotion. Well done :) Take care.