hey marta!!! WOW!!! This poem was soo powerful and sad, yet beautifully written..Like all your poems!!!
Never forget how highly I think of you!!!! Your amazing!!!
Stay safe hun!!
luv always
elizabeth

Very beautiful. I love poems like this.

wow, excellent poem, marta! i have to admit you are a very talented writer, i cannot wait to read more of your poems!

i thought it was great and the only thing i would change would be this:

A white rich carpet
Sooked bright red
From all the times
She tried to bled.

and i would put it into what ♪ ♥♪ ♥♪ said:

A white rich carpet
Soaked bright red
From all the times
That she had bled.

other than that i loved it!!

wow that is an amazing poem! it is so sad! please remember that there are still people who care about you! if you ever need to talk leave me a message

-jenn