Short and to the point... In some ways I do relate... but I was a bit confused at the end... this poem flows really well, keep it up :)

good and right to the point

This is really good..I luv the lines:
I have decided
I refuse to live
I have been misguided
And have nothing left to give
Very,Very well done...Keep writting..ur really good!
Shanney

This is alot like the last one I commented on. I like this one too. If you added more stanzas it would really make this alot stronger (in my opinion only), because I know that when I finished it I wanted more information.
With love, K Kristina