Wow, that was an amazing poem! So descrpitive and the ending was so breath-taking, it was really dark and written beautifully, it's perfect :) x x x x

wow that was a well written dark poem

that was freakin awesome!!!!! AH! so much detail..i swear..i could almost smell that in the first few stanzas....yeah...great job! keep it up and i hope that there will be a few more like this from you..it was written very well...AH!

Your writing is beautiful and amazing. . . I can hardly express how great this is I know I say this all the time but I do love it! The writing and the flow the sense of death coming is just compelling. . . keep up the great writing!

Love, Taylor

wow nice poem!!!

holy shit girl! you r such a good writer, keep it up, halfway through it made me feel like i should be writing the poem cause that is exactly how i feel, hey mabey we could become pen pals! my email is imonfire06@yahoo.com, email me sometime ok? xoxoxoxox
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jescelle

You are VERY talented. This was a superb poem!

wow!!
that was so amaizing....hell i gotta invent a new word for this write...

FANTABULOUS!!!

Whoaa... great poem Andrew! I just want to say thank you for all of the comments you leave me! :-) They're so encouraging and really make me feel appreciated! Keep up the awesome work and take care hun! :-)

~Grace

*Oops... I mean AndreA

Your writing...is so beautiful...its remarkable...im speechless..all i can say is wow

That really touched me, almost like a connection to your writing. I haven't been quite so impressed in a very long time... and the imagery used. It was like I was witnessing the whole event. Absolutely incredible.

Excellent poem as always, please keep writing