so far this is really good, i cannot wait to read the ending!

Awesome, very nice, i liked it a lot, 5's all round here.
bye bye
Ben

ooooooooo!! wow speechless im in awe with ur poem its beautiful

very nice poem !! keep on with the good work :D i loved ur work and i hope that u love mine too !! hope that u check on it and comment

Wow-that made me hold my breath. I'm not usually into these poems but it was quite breath-taking literally, like mystical and peaceful, really tranquil. Great work on it-it must have taken a while to write, its excellent though! KIU!
--Sierra Rae

wow, love it!

Wow, that was very good! I felt the emotions that you conveyed by it, awesome job!

awesome, awesome, awesome poem... wow! im adding you to my favorites! 5/5 definitely

That was a very beautiful piece. I loved how you used words that were not quite as empty as everyday language. I'm sorry to see that your "butterfly" had to meet such an untimely demise...so sad. Loved your work. I plan on reading more.
Take care, Aaron

Beautiful peic, I really liked the ending the best, but the whole poem was absolutly AMAZING. nothing else said
-Cheerfully Cynical

good work....~sherrie~

nice job!! really nice!! keep it up!! :)

That was excellent. The word 'wow' is repeating in my head. Very original and profound. Keep it up.

Took Quite a new look on emptiness and pain, i truly loved the words you used to paint a picture of your pain...you're very talented...

God Bless
Love Heather.

This poem is awesome! Love the butterfly metaphor..have used it myself :)

wow...a five all the way! keep it up!

I can see why you poems have so many awards, you are a great writer, keep it up!

really good. i dont hold a candle to you. you really are good.

Very well done, the depiction of the butterfly as your soul was really nice. i like how you made it go through it's metamorphasis and then showed us how it related to how we go through changes in our everyday life. It was very well thought out and enjoy it emmencely.

Five/Five

P.S. thank you for your vote/and or comment on my poem, i really liked what you had to say, thank you very much for your input/vote.

You painted a vivid picture in my mind. Great job! I loved it