Oh Allen, that's beautiful. I hope everything goes well for you two. Are you going to tell her soon or wait awhile? I know it's scary but, as someone once said, there are no words more painful than "it-might-have-been". But I dunno, I can't even GET OVER my ex so, you don't have to listen to me.

Very well written, I liked it alot!

awww, i love this poem! :)

nicely written

AWWW. Beautifully written poem, i think we've all been there before. Go for it i say, i did and i've never regreted for one day. if she doesn't like you but your freindship is true then it should be able to withstand any obstacle that comes along the way. but if it breaks down then maybe in that case, it was never really strong/true in the first place and you deserve better than that. xmollyxx

btw, i writing this on the assumption that it based on real life and how you feel. if it is not, then just ignore everything i wrote (except for the bit about the poem being beautifully written, it was.)

Awww Allen! Thats simply beautiful hunny, such perfect wording. I hope everything works out for you and you-know-who. (didnt kno if it was a gud idea to say her name) I say go for it, lifes too short to muck around but be cautious, coz i'd hate 2 c the friendship between u and ur ex go down the drain. Best Wishes and love always, liz

"cursed blessing" nice title!
i like the way some lines oppose themselves....nice style....
great poem :-)

That was GREAT!! Wowie.. What can I say more?? I have a saying for You: "You might regret what You say, but You'll regret what You don't say so much more!" That is one of My motto's for Life.. =P But I think that if You truly Love her and know for sure that it's Love, You should tell her.. For if she doesn't feel the same You both could still be friends right?! I think it's worth the try.. Your poem was very romantic, so I guess You're romantic too ha?! ;) (Girls Love that.. =P) But I gotta be honest with You: My "Love-Life" stinks as no other.. =$ Ghihi, ohw well.. I just Hope that Your Love-Life will be great.. I wish You all the best of Luck!! Take care and Enjoy Your day!! Ciao now xoxo

P.S. If it worked out well, please tell Me how you handled it.. =P *Kidding!* I'm scares to fall in Love know.. The last time really really hurt Me.. =P I feel like telling You the whole story.. But I'll spare You.. (A) Really bye now xXx (Once again: GREAT POEM!!)

:):) Yayyy, I am really happy to get all these comments from you people, you guys rocks :D

Luvmeluvr/Andrea/Rachel: Thank you guy for reading and commenting, Im really happy that you liked it :)
Molly: Thank you for your kind words, and yes, Im writing based on real life :)
Jackie: Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I think I'll have to tell her soon... but bit chicken... :S... lol
Alysse: :D Hehe, thanks for the "you-know-who" that was cute ;) ...but I made a mistake in my lastest poem and had her name in it... when I got around to change it, a comment has already been made...opps...
Megan: Thank you for your comment :) and I hope to get the girl too :D:D
Megha: oh thank you :) That line is my favourite too!!! :)
Jarous: Thank you for your advise, I treasure that very much, I'll indeed act on this matter... :)
LittleAngel: LOL, if it worked out, I'll be sure to tell EVERYONE :D:D:D and I'll make sure the news gets around to you :)
Chris: Thank you for your words, your poems are alway an inspiration to me too :)

hello:D i must say that this poem is very nice and i lovvvvvveeed the way u compared between having her a friend or losing her as a lover :D and i loved the use of word in "curse"
" blessing " .. this poem leaves u thinking and has very deep meanings :D i hope that u get this girl becoz u deserve the best :D:D:D byee

This is an interesting poem..Has a lot of feelings and meaning in it, Hope everything goes okay. Another awesome poem of yours Allen, just beautiful..Keep on writting!